Assassins 2

good stuff man. i thought the script was great. some of the spots needed a little more meat, like the phone call. the cinematography was pretty good. to be perfectly honest. i think it's time for you to start using actors in your projects. that guy who wanted to the bear dead was great. he had a real character. marie and ryan...well yeah...that was rough. i didn't like the line where marie said "what are you two doing here" because it felt like she knew you guys or something, which made me feel like i was missing something in the story. I really liked it when ryan came in asking "okay, which one of you is oscar?" that was really funny and the way he delivered it was fantastic. i wish you or tom had said the line "what happens now" because it didn't feel right with you two being silent through that entire altercation. i think if you ran through the script with real actors and you were on the outside of the scene behind a camera these things would be significantly more noticeable to you. all in all, i did enjoy the film, but i feel like it's time for you to step up your game and be more of a director in your films.
good work man